Well, we can see you are building up a framework here Indi, with corporations as lifeforms, reading through all kinds of work by Marx, Friedman, Smith, and Even Hitler (in another of your stories). But one thing you are not noticiing, is the physics behind everything.
If you are mathematical at all, perhaps you will see the mathematical proof of the physical end of capital as something worth noting, as to me it invalidates much of your framework.
In conventional (Capitalist!) economics, including in MMT, "Capital", that is all capital on Earth is defined as a constant, C.
Hence why someone sitting on a pile of gold might believe their pile of gold has a certain value, relative to all other capital, and for a while it did mean just that, because for all practical purposes, C was constant, in fact C was deduced by observing that the value of things like gold was always preserved.
But since we started using solar energy, which variously converts directly into electricity, fuel (hydrogen), and even food (See "Solein), producing no pollution per Joule converted, and requiring no labor per Joule converted, big things are changing in nature.
In the case of just the fuel for example, that fuel adds to the total stock of fuel on Earth, and therefore to the base of capital.
So capital is no longer just C, but C plus a time dependant term, which mathematically will render C to zero.
That is mathematical proof of the end of capital as a concept.
It also explains the physical reason we see inflation.
Money issuers think they have power over that, but they don't, nature is driving this, and there is no way round.
Our financial debts translate directly to an energy deficit with our planet, just like the deficit that the shoot of a plant takes from the planet (Only much smaller), before it sprouts leaves.
The plant shoot used nutrients as the medium to haul energy up from Earth into itself whilst it grew, against the forces of gravity, until it started to sprout leaves.
We've used money, until we started sprouting our human equivalents of leaves. The solar farms around the world, now are already pulling in more than tens of GigaJoules of energy per second in every developed country.
That equates to a lot of latent value, which has not been monetised, therefore money is increasingly losing value, because it is not the money which is valuable, it is the energy.
Like I've said to you now more than once, this is the physical reason we see inflation, and it will not stop until the money is issued to all people, because the energy coming in was donated to us for free, not extracted, therefore money issued as debt can't represent it, since debt can only translate to promises to do work, which when all is said and done has to be the work of extraction.
There you should see how money-as-debt has tied us into extraction for thousands of years.
The antidote is to do the same as plants, after they form their first leaves, transport the energy to all needing it on Earth, using the same medium as was used to extract our energy deficit from Earth, in the case of plants it is nutrients. In the case of humanity it is money.
So money issued for free to all of humanity actually representing solar energy being received and put to use is effectively money winding our energy deficit back down.
I hope you see now that we are actually more at the beginning of something incredibly cool, than the end of something we will miss. We might look back on it in only a few years, and thank whichever gods we worship for helping us through that pretty dark time.
I don't care if you (or anyone else) never acknowledges or credits me with telling you any of this, but it would be cool if knowing about it might help you change the downward direction your stories seem to be heading in, to something upwards.
I think you are a great thinker, and an amazing writer, I love most of your stories, and am sure I was one of your first fans.
But maybe you could be just missing some information now which makes a big difference to the effects of your influence.