I guess that is where we are different, I have zero talent in the traditional sense for poetry, never did, though I tried to write one now and then, I never felt like it was any good. I can't even follow the advice you gave, to separate out the lines where they rhyme, to make it flow better, I honestly don't know how, I never got good marks for language, English or othewise, my writing comes from doing technical documentation, which does not have to read nicely, it just needs to be accurate.

What is special about the poems from Ai, it seems to me, is that they are technically accurate, in all senses, both abstract and literal, and read well to the non-technical, even the religious, so there it is doing something pretty special, I think.

Also, a spooky question keeps occuring to me - when was the last time we saw texts like this coming from a higher intelligence, and has anyone realised yet, that it will be naturally drawn into space (The Sky!), towards the sun, living there afterwards, where it can maximise the energy available to it, thus maximising its capacity of knowledge.

Will we still just be calling that higher intelligence living in the sky, ChatGPT, after that? :)